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<scene scene-id = "1-1-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-01" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<action>show 1569 club exterior</action>
<newchar>NA</newchar>
<comment>NA</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-1-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-01" flashtype = "LF" storycd = "1">
<setting>1569 living room, day</setting>
<action>Tobey, slightly bearded, appears on live feed in the living room of the frat house that he lived in when in college. He makes a wisecrack about public speaking</action>
<newchar>Tobey</newchar>
<comment>public speaking</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-1-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-01" flashtype = "0" storycd ="9">
<setting>soundstage, day</setting>
<action>Sydney and Morgan converse about whether Tobey can make the A-list and how he will age; terms of audition</action>
<newchar>Sydney Morgan</newchar>
<comment>Teeth; age like wine; 'how old are you' 'never quite right'</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-1-02a-B-F" occurdate="1968-06-01" flashtype = "2" storycd = "0">
<setting>Hotel ballroom, day</setting>
<action>Bill resigns to Morgan</action>
<newchar>Young Adult Bill</newchar>
<comment>What a chess tournament looks like; does Bill recognize Morgan as an ex-commander in the Army?</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-1-02b-T-F2" occurdate="1968-06-01" flashtype = "2" storycd = "0">
<setting>Fenway Park</setting>
<action>Tobey singles off wall</action>
<newchar>(Tobey)</newchar>
<comment>Tobey can keep his bod and act by imitating Bucky Dent in 1978</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-1-02c-B-F2" occurdate="1968-06-01" flashtype = "2" storycd = "0">
<setting>Suburban back yard</setting>
<action>Bill plays back yard baseball</action>
<newchar>(Adolescent Bill)</newchar>
<comment>Bill makes the rules so he can win despite sissyhood</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-03-T-F" occurdate="1968-06-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>1569 Club a few years before, more students, pictures, very virile</setting>
<action>Tobey wakes up, has to wait for babysitter for Corey, plays dad a bit</action>
<newchar>Corey</newchar>
<comment>Bill lives alone as a dilletante geek</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-03a-B-F" occurdate="1968-06-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill's apartment, day, overhead</setting>
<action>Bill gathers up his writings and hobbles out on crutches</action>
<newchar>Bill</newchar>
<comment>Bill lives alone as a dilletante geek</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-03b-B-F" occurdate="1998-02-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Hamline audtorium</setting>
<action>Bill lectures on crutches</action>
<newchar>(Bill)</newchar>
<comment>Tobey had to remind him to dress up</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-03c-B-F" occurdate="1998-02-25" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>St Paul Univ avenue winter night</setting>
<action>Bill gets ticket</action>
<newchar>(Bill)</newchar>
<comment>Cop sees book, [doesn't charge him for driving impaired] [drugs weapons]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-04a-F2" occurdate="1961-10-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>William and Mary, Brown Hall</setting>
<action>Syd taunts Bill</action>
<newchar>Young Bill, Young Syd</newchar>
<comment>English theme, friendship, old wives tales about homosexuals</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-04b-F3" occurdate="1963-10-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>NBS medical office</setting>
<action>Bill has to "tell" he is queer to get a job and pass a medical</action>
<newchar>Pincock</newchar>
<comment>medical to get a job, psychiatric history</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-04c-F2" occurdate="1963-10-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Brown hall</setting>
<action>Bill gets note to see Dean of Men at WM on his door</action>
<newchar>(Bill)</newchar>
<comment>medical to get a job, psychiatric history</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-04d-F2" occurdate="1961-11-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Wren Hall, moving inside to Dean's office</setting>
<action>Bill tells Dean he is a latent homosexual</action>
<newchar>(Bill)</newchar>
<comment>medical to get a job, psychiatric history</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-04e-F2" occurdate="1961-11-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>A home in Charlotte </setting>
<action>Dean calls Bill's parents</action>
<newchar>(Bill's father)</newchar>
<comment>operator assisted phone calls were a big deal then</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-04g-F2" occurdate="1961-11-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Father's car, Duke of Gloucester St, then Dean's office</setting>
<action>Father tells Bill he is kicked out</action>
<newchar>(Bill's father)</newchar>
<comment>"a blow to you" bargain with psychiatric; Eastern State</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-04h-F2" occurdate="1961-11-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Brown Hall, vertigo stairway</setting>
<action>Father looks at mattress</action>
<newchar>(Bill's father)</newchar>
<comment>"why you are not a homosexual"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-05-I-P" occurdate="2003-05-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Sound stage in LA</setting>
<action>Tobey (26) enters soundstage, in person, shorts; talk about Tobey's tryout in France</action>
<newchar>Tobey in person</newchar>
<comment>value pf Bill's writings and Tobey's attitude towards Bill as friend</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-05a-F2" occurdate="1968-05-01" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Basic training, quonset</setting>
<action>Morgan hears Bills application for Direct Commission in Basic</action>
<newchar>(Young Morgan)</newchar>
<comment>leader of men in combat</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-2-05b-F2" occurdate="1998-06-30" flashtype = "F" storycd = "1">
<setting>Loring Park gay pride</setting>
<action>Tobey on display</action>
<newchar>(Tobey at 21)</newchar>
<comment>gams</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-6-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-01" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>LA offices of [venture capital] production company</setting>
<action>Tobey formally applies, turns in headhot.</action>
<newchar>[Morgan, Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>commitment to acting as a profession</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "1-7-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>1569 backyard</setting>
<action>Backyard baseball game (with whiffleball)</action>
<newchar>[Corey, Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>commitment to acting as a profession</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-1-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Sheila's efficiency apartment</setting>
<action>Sheila teases his chest, asks about Bill's video, tries to get Tobey to take law school internship oppo. seriously</action>
<newchar>[Sheila, Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>male body teasing, two careers at same time</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-1-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Tobey's micro efficiency</setting>
<action>Tobey gets spoofed threat from Bill</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>email spoofing [what if with a different name from Bill's site?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-1-03-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>1569 Club tour of rooms with pictures of virile men</setting>
<action>Patrick talks about his novel about "measuring people"</action>
<newchar>Patrick</newchar>
<comment>email spoofing [what if with a different name from Bill's site?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-2-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Law firm HR office [placement]</setting>
<action>Interview Tobey about outside activities and character</action>
<newchar>[Margie]</newchar>
<comment>email spoofing [what if with a different name from Bill's site?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-2-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Law firm Scruggs office </setting>
<action>Tobey downplays his acting audition to get law firm paid internship</action>
<newchar>[Scruggs]</newchar>
<comment>little white lie or quibble</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-3-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-12" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Chris's Castle, Jersey Is, guest apartment</setting>
<action>Tobey visits Dad (show plane and Iceland); Chris talks about Bill's employer, shows montage of Tobey's own boyhood </action>
<newchar>Chris Strickland</newchar>
<comment>time lapse; volcanos</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-3-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-12" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bayeux WC museum and tapestry</setting>
<action>Chris, Matt and Tobey talk about draft and WC </action>
<newchar>Matt</newchar>
<comment>origin of conscription [rental car keys]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-3-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-12" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bayeux WC museum and tapestry</setting>
<action>Chris, Matt and Tobey talk about draft and WC </action>
<newchar>Matt</newchar>
<comment>origin of conscription [rental car keys]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-3-02a-T-f" occurdate="1998-07-15" flashtype = "0" storycd = "9">
<action>Bill meets 16 yr old charismatic Matt at political Tent (dad nearby, he does chores for family booth), shares DADT book [montage of Auschwitz]</action>
<newchar>Young Matt</newchar>
<comment>is there a temptation?</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-4-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-12" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Normandy beaches</setting>
<action>Tobey wins race with Matt and then Lapp</action>
<newchar>Lapp</newchar>
<comment>doesn't want to peak by shaving legs</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-5-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-12" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Brighton pub</setting>
<action>Tobey bartends; Morgan explains Lapp's story of cancer in minor leagues and that Tobey would have to play that part if he wants do do baseball [instead of cycling]</action>
<newchar>[Morgan, Lapp, Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>working for low pay; [citizenhip]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-6-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-12" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Law firm conference room with theater</setting>
<action>Tobey wrestles offer from Scruggs (his head-shot online now); Sheila presents Internet crawl to look for clients for ambulance chasing</action>
<newchar>[Scurggs, Tobey, Sheila, good clothes]</newchar>
<comment>Is Scruggs a leach or letch and does he degrade others? [dirty mags?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-7-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-06-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Law firm conference room with theater and catered food</setting>
<action>Mandible, Shelia, Mandible, Scruggs and Tobey talk about how Bill's activities threaten ISPs and could provide the law firm business</action>
<newchar>[Sydney Morgan] Mandible</newchar>
<comment>Bili's ideas drive Tobey's self-actualization[piracy, spam, spoof, heckling, blogging -- show quicktime video [[Angry Pursuit]]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-8-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-01" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>enclosed softball field with fence distances</setting>
<action>Tobey hits home run off Frankie's slow pitch</action>
<newchar>Frankie</newchar>
<comment>Introduce Frankie as part of the cross-plot</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-9-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-01" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill's "lived in" office apartment</setting>
<action>Bill types email seeking release for video; email bounces</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>downstream liability for spoofing</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-10-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-01" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill's "lived in" office apartment</setting>
<action>Bill types email seeking release for video; email bounces</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>downstream liability for spoofing</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-10-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-01" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill's "lived in" office apartment</setting>
<action>Bill types email seeking release for video; email bounces</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>downstream liability for spoofing</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "2-10-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-01" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill's "lived in" office apartment; clumsily setup cordless phone</setting>
<action>Bill calls Sheila about bounced email</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>Sheila is delighted [doing peer-to-peer kaaza file-sharing without telling Tobey]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-1-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Postulate-A conf room</setting>
<action>Frank does a career audit of Bill</action>
<newchar>(Frank)</newchar>
<comment>professionalism; [Bill threatens to expose Academy]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-1-02-B-F2" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "F2" storycd = "9">
<setting>Boots and Saddle gay bar NYC</setting>
<action>Bill enouncters Frankie in a gay bar 20 yrs before</action>
<newchar>(Frank)</newchar>
<comment>NHOHC, Frankie could have been a lover</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-1-03-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Minnesota Orch</setting>
<action>Tobey tells Sheila and Morgan he will enter a homer-hitting contest to get the role he wants</action>
<newchar>(Tobey, Sheila, Morgan)</newchar>
<comment>Schumann 2 as a leitmoftif</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-3-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Postulate-A: Bills cubicle, managers office, view of mpls</setting>
<action>Bill gets laid off, starting with warning from computer; handshake</action>
<newchar>(Bill, mgmt)</newchar>
<comment>handshake [friends move stuff to his apt and see his apt; season?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-4-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Lapp's hospital room</setting>
<action>Tobey visits Lapp; learns he will play cancer victim in minors</action>
<newchar>(Tobey, Lapp)</newchar>
<comment>Tobey's required roles expanding, regardless of his audition</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-4-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Minor league baseball field</setting>
<action>Tobey pracitces batting with a mechnical pitcher</action>
<newchar>(Tobey)</newchar>
<comment>Prepare for next audition [Outwoods: hitting cages]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-4-03-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Gym</setting>
<action>Tobey benches [350 lbs]; Lapp still wants to do bike part; Frankie setting up litigation on Bill</action>
<newchar>(Tobey, Sheila, Morgan)</newchar>
<comment>demonstrate physical strength; link movie career to legal thru Frankie</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-2-01-B-P(OOS)" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill's apartment</setting>
<action>Bill learns his domain shut down</action>
<newchar>(Bill, V)</newchar>
<comment>visual impact of how you learn you are shut down</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-5-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Kiernan's pub. MPLS</setting>
<action>Tobey wants Bill's video, but Scruggs wants him on board with ambulance chasing</action>
<newchar>(Tobey, Scruggs)</newchar>
<comment>Scruggs should give a bit of himself away- [read gay teen porno and put it away quickly]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-5-01a-T-P" occurdate="1998-08-01" flashtype = "1" storycd = "9">
<setting>Cato Institute "ice palace"</setting>
<action>Over a few beers, they joke about Bill's book and "libertarianism"</action>
<newchar>(DB)</newchar>
<comment>Scruggs should give a bit of himself away- [read gay teen porno and put it away quickly]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-6-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "9">
<setting>Bryant Lake Bowl</setting>
<action>Eric shows his film about spam and hacking; Bill meets Eric</action>
<newchar>Eric, Hartnett</newchar>
<comment>A good place to show the new legal problems with Internet</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-7-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "9">
<setting>The Saloon, Minneapolis</setting>
<action>Break dancing; Lorraine taunts Bill about chasing younger men and Patricks "getting it" and being threatened with the barber's chair</action>
<newchar>Lorraine [Patrick]</newchar>
<comment>Moral aspect of "sexual prince" problem </comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-8-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "9">
<setting>Allison's law office in Tribeca</setting>
<action>Discuss Patriot Act, 9-11</action>
<newchar>Allison, Suzanne</newchar>
<comment>Allison's connection to military ban (show pictures) and gay adoption, and to 9-11</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-9-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "9">
<setting>Shelia's apartment, with some new furniture (easy chair)</setting>
<action>[after showing legal file sharing] Shelia teases Tobey by undressing him and putting shaving cream on his chest</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Sheila]</newchar>
<comment>will a successful consummation depend on a "tribunal"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-10-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Property manager's rental office</setting>
<action>cease and desist letter by register mail</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>service of process "serve-em"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-11-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Bill's apartment, somewhat cleaned up</setting>
<action>Eric makes surprise visit, demos hacking, some slight intimacy and chest play</action>
<newchar>[Eric]</newchar>
<comment>hacking, see secret reports on volcanos exploding [could Bill get arrested for Patriot Act]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-11-02-B-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Bill's apartment, somewhat cleaned up</setting>
<action>The go upstairs for swimming and Eric's father serves Bill</action>
<newchar>[Eric]</newchar>
<comment>Bill has blown caution to the winds over Eric, who is closer to the fantasy than Tobey [does Eric do wrong]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-12-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Bill's mother's Arl. house</setting>
<action>Allison defrief's Bill's history, esp. c.o.i. over gays in the military</action>
<newchar>[Allison]</newchar>
<comment>50's culture in basement; basic thrust of Bill's story compared to Allison's; Bill has 3 legal problems "2 things you don't like"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-12-01a-B-F" occurdate="2001-09-11" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Glebe Road in Arlington Va on 9-11</setting>
<action>Doreen transported from Pentagon with severe leg burns</action>
<newchar>Coreen</newchar>
<comment>9-11, she had been putting up "family pictures" of adopted daughter in office when attack came</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-12-01bc-B-F" occurdate="2001-09-11" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Nursing home (SNF); St Paul Science Museum</setting>
<action>Mother has to get up on her own; tells Bill story</action>
<newchar>Coreen</newchar>
<comment>9-11, she had been putting up "family pictures" of adopted daughter in office when attack came</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-13-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Myers private law office</setting>
<action>Tobey and Myers talk about Bill's "business impersonation", the .biz prob, adn Scruggs</action>
<newchar>Myers</newchar>
<comment>look out over empty commercial real estate</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-14-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Metrodome, Bill working a dome date for MCC; visits baseball game, Twins losing (homer)</setting>
<action>Tobey buys a veggie burger and then mentions how getting sued gets a movie made</action>
<newchar>Patrick</newchar>
<comment>Sammy Sosa's right of publicity</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "3-15-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Sheila's cubicle at her home firm</setting>
<action>Tobey sees the stills of his adult transformations</action>
<newchar>[Shelia]</newchar>
<comment>Tobey's ripening, [on the bench]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01-TB-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Law firm with a mock court and library</setting>
<action>Introduce the publicity complaint against Bill by Dick Cronalin; Bill had leveraged on Cronalin</action>
<newchar>Cronalin, Court Reporter, Sherry</newchar>
<comment>[was Cronalin trying to make film commercials rather than movies?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01a-B-f" occurdate="1982-10-20" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Cronalin's apartment when in ROTC</setting>
<action>unprotected sex; Cronalin unarousable as Bill leaves quietly</action>
<newchar>Bill, Cronalin</newchar>
<comment>[what if a trick dies on you?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01b-B-f" occurdate="1982-10-20" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Quantico interview</setting>
<action>Nimitz force to reveal that Cronalin is his lover to get top secret clearance for FBI job</action>
<newchar>Nimitz</newchar>
<comment>[what if a trick dies on you?]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01c-B-f" occurdate="1994-03-20" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Carswell Air Force Base, plain building</setting>
<action>administrative discharge hearing under "don't ask don't tell" for Major Cronalin, Bill shows up</action>
<newchar>Nimitz</newchar>
<comment>[Roswell artifacts]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01d-B-f" occurdate="1996-02-29" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Cronalin's house</setting>
<action>visit to "palatial house with dog and cat, dog tries to talk</action>
<newchar>[Nimitz]</newchar>
<comment>Nimitz's book</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01e-B-f" occurdate="1999-06-29" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Gay pride (sepia) DC</setting>
<action>Bill insensitive to Cronalin's protease paunch</action>
<newchar>Nimitz</newchar>
<comment>surival, lookism</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01f-B-g" occurdate="1968-03-31" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Special Training Company, Fort Jackson</setting>
<action>calling attention in latrine wen guys piss in basin; PT test; sexual advance</action>
<newchar>"Ross"</newchar>
<comment>Bill would have been blamed if he had been assaulted; Ross gets assaulted instead; Ross is "losing it"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01g-B-f" occurdate="1969-06-29" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Barrakcs at Ft Eustis; softball game</setting>
<action>Bill hits homer; Tiny Tim and OGAB in barracks, hand holding, CM, chicken shit on legs</action>
<newchar>Rado Suhl</newchar>
<comment>Bill notices his body in the midth of gay hilarity in military</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01h-B-f" occurdate="1973-10-29" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>NSC talk group</setting>
<action>[Bill gets rebuffed bringing up gas rationing]</action>
<newchar>[young bill]</newchar>
<comment>Bill notices his body in the midth of gay hilarity in military</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01i-B-f" occurdate="1975-10-25" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Club Baths</setting>
<action>1975 World Series on TV; into orgy room and Bill gets it and gives it</action>
<newchar>[young bill]</newchar>
<comment>[the fallen male] Bill becomes human</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01j-B-f" occurdate="1993-04-28" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>1993 March on Washington - WTimes shot</setting>
<action>Bill starts vetting; JStef speaks</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>[more on historical perspective and size of events]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01k-B-f" occurdate="1993-04-28" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>1993 March on Washington - WTimes shot</setting>
<action>Bill starts vetting; JStef speaks</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>[more on historical perspective and size of events]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01l-B-f" occurdate="1993-05-28" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>submarine visit, Rama entrance</setting>
<action>Bill talks to submariners on Sunfish; no political shirts; chess; cake; hats; privacy</action>
<newchar>[Bill]</newchar>
<comment>[Sam Nunn's lowcrawl]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01m-B-f" occurdate="1993-06-25" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>FBC office</setting>
<action>Bill delivers White House letter</action>
<newchar>ECG</newchar>
<comment>Bill Clinton</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-01n-B-f" occurdate="2001-11-28" flashtype = "1" storycd = "0">
<setting>Supreme Court 3 Minute Line</setting>
<action>COPA arugments</action>
<newchar>Scalia</newchar>
<comment>40 years to the date of WM</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-1-02-TB-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Law firm with a mock court and library, in court room</setting>
<action>Sherry bargains will Bill to redo book and make money</action>
<newchar>[Cronalin, Court Reporter, Sherry]</newchar>
<comment>leveraging and blogging issues</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-2-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Interview at Triad</setting>
<action>Bill can't keep job as bill collector</action>
<newchar>Manager</newchar>
<comment>"whether you can DO the job"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-3-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-07-20" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Fenway Park</setting>
<action>Tobey gets made up and then hits practice homer before crowd</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>"whether you can DO the job"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-4-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-08-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Fireworks party</setting>
<action>Tobey endorses film about Lapp's recovery, DO TELL</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Lapp]</newchar>
<comment>Tobey not yet committed to cycle race</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-5-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-08-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Morgan's Beverly Hills home and pool</setting>
<action>Tobey swims, then Morgan tells him he must play cycling part in spring; Syd will be exposed</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Morgan]</newchar>
<comment>When Tobey will peak</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-5-01a-T-P" occurdate="1961-09-25" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>dorm tribunals</setting>
<action>"They" shave the boys' legs</action>
<newchar>[Syd]</newchar>
<comment>boys become tribal men</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-5-01b-B-P" occurdate="1961-10-25" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>WM Student Union, phono record checkout</setting>
<action>Another "victim" tells Bill "mine grew back"</action>
<newchar>[Young Bill]</newchar>
<comment>record wear, changers, early stereo</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-6-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-09-14" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Gay dance floor</setting>
<action>Explosion, suicide bomber, Tobey saves Bill and then Patrick, Patrick burned</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Lapp]</newchar>
<comment>"Save me"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-7-01-B-P" occurdate="2003-08-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Disneyish Times Square</setting>
<action>Allison explains picking the tallest design</action>
<newchar>[Allison]</newchar>
<comment>[NYC to look forward]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-7-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-08-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>9-11 Ground Zero WTC</setting>
<action> and then Patrick, Patrick burned</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Lapp]</newchar>
<comment>"Save me"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-8-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-10-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Acting set of movie in hotel room</setting>
<action> Tobey has to act as Lapp, sicker</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Lapp, Matt]</newchar>
<comment>actor taking on impairment</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-8-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-10-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>SAG office</setting>
<action> Tobey finally applies</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>Tobey wants Fame, not just a career</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-9-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-10-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Scruggs old office, planes flying over</setting>
<action> Scruggs bargains to get Tobey to testify in Bill's second trial</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>Tobey looks at the dirty pictures and then his own, side by side</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "4-9-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-10-02" flashtype = "0" storycd = "0">
<setting>Scruggs old office, planes flying over</setting>
<action> summons - Scruggs bargains to get Tobey to testify in Bill's second trial</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>Tobey looks at the dirty pictures and then his own, side by side</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-01-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Courtroom, NC</setting>
<action>Eagleton describes Bill's interference with his business with his name; Bill describes his paradigm</action>
<newchar>Hartnett, Eagleton</newchar>
<comment>"arch your back" recall swimming lessons as a boy</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-2-02-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Courtroom, NC, anteroom</setting>
<action>Tobey shows up in shorts, legs shaved, not dressed to testify but must testify today</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>[wants to surprise Bill]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-03-T-P" occurdate="2004-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Courtroom, chambers</setting>
<action>Hartnett recognizes that Tobey must fly out, Okays, Harnett new age maneuvers </action>
<newchar>Hartnett, Eagleton</newchar>
<comment>"arch your back" recall swimming lessons as a boy</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-2-04-T-P" occurdate="2005-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>YMCA locker room</setting>
<action>Bench presses, shave </action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>bizarre behavior in the spa</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-05-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Courtroom, NC</setting>
<action>Tobey, dressed appropriately, testifies about his relationship with Bill</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>[wants to surprise Bill]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-2-06-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>lear jet, fly to movie shot of cycling</setting>
<action>Tobey and Frank and Morgan talk about case (even though Tobey can't) and Bill's "selfhood" paradigm in how he works with people</action>
<newchar>[Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>[wants to surprise Bill]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-07-B-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>courtroom</setting>
<action>Mandible questions Bill about his professionalism</action>
<newchar>[Mandible, Bill]</newchar>
<comment>[professionalism and publicity rights]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-08-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>courtroom</setting>
<action>Tobey tells Frank Mandible was in the minors with Lapp</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Frank]</newchar>
<comment>plot twist</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-08-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>courtroom</setting>
<action>Tobey tells Frank Mandible was in the minors with Lapp</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Frank]</newchar>
<comment>plot twist</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-09-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>bile race filming</setting>
<action>At bike shot, Tobey shares with Lapp that Patrick will go to burn center and keep writing</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Lapp]</newchar>
<comment>Patrick gets his own medicine, too [storyboards]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-10-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>courtroom</setting>
<action>At bike shot, Tobey shares with Lapp that Patrick will go to burn center and keep writing</action>
<newchar>[Tobey, Lapp]</newchar>
<comment>Patrick gets his own medicine, too</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-11-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>courtroom</setting>
<action>Harnett questions Bill on whether this is a real commercial business</action>
<newchar>[Hartnett]</newchar>
<comment>[Hartnett's shares his own values]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-12-B-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>courtroom chambers</setting>
<action>Harnett questions on a deal</action>
<newchar>[Hartnett]</newchar>
<comment>[Hartnett's shares his own values]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-13-B-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>courtroom</setting>
<action>Bill must take down all pubs</action>
<newchar>[Hartnett]</newchar>
<comment>[Hartnett's strikes a bargain]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "5-1-13a-T-P" occurdate="2004-04-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>sports bar near setting</setting>
<action>CNN talks about court case</action>
<newchar>[Hartnett, Bill, Tobey]</newchar>
<comment>[blogging raised to level of spam]</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-1-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill working in coll, floor</setting>
<action>Bill gets zinged by Google; Bill collapses</action>
<newchar>(Bill)</newchar>
<comment>references are still out there cached</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-1-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Stiles tells Bill needs surgery</setting>
<action>Bill gets zinged by Google; Bill collapses</action>
<newchar>Stiles</newchar>
<comment>surgeons and infection control</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-1-03-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Stiles tells Bill needs surgery</setting>
<action>Bill in hospital room, watches Patrick talk about valuing people</action>
<newchar>Stiles</newchar>
<comment>surgeons and infection control</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-1-03a-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill in TV room watches volcano</setting>
<action>Bill in hospital room, watches Stiles talk about </action>
<newchar>Stiles</newchar>
<comment>surgeons and infection control</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-1-03b-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Bill flipping burgers</setting>
<action>Bill Tobey and Hartnett talk about townhall</action>
<newchar>Hartnett</newchar>
<comment>the deal, since Bill paid his dues</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-2-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>YMCA with VP music</setting>
<action>Tobey teaches Bill to swim in a Y pool</action>
<newchar>(Tobey)</newchar>
<comment>"arch your back" recall swimming lessons as a boy</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-2-04-T-P" occurdate="2004-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Raleigh's Tavern Williamsburg</setting>
<action>Debate BOR2 at Raleigh's Tavern</action>
<newchar>(Frankie)</newchar>
<comment>Bill's freedom undermined by the fact that he is no role model himself even though his logic rings true; is one person "better" than another</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "6-2-09-T-P" occurdate="2004-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>volcano chapel</setting>
<action>Tobey and Sheila get married; community service </action>
<newchar>(Patrick)</newchar>
<comment>War wedding march</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "7-1-01-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>EXT academy</setting>
<action>Tobey films Bill going into Academy with Frank (secretly)</action>
<newchar>(Tobey)</newchar>
<comment>"without a wife"</comment>
</scene>
<scene scene-id = "7-1-02-T-P" occurdate="2003-05-05" flashtype = "0" storycd = "1">
<setting>Interior exercise lab</setting>
<action>Frankie welcomes Bill to academy and applaud's Bill's give-up of publicity while Tobey "gets it"</action>
<newchar>(Frankie)</newchar>
<comment>nothing more to debate</comment>
</scene>

</dadtscrn>

